Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

One of Viscera

one of viscera
                                                bearer of every passion
                                                      becomes victim of.........

                                                   heart makes life live on
                                                 gives highest contribution
                                                       till dies to the end

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Skat A March 20, 2014 at 1:40 PM I like both haiku. The verse in reverse.. ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A January 16, 2014 at 11:03 PM your pen is of passion.BL.. very deep ending..Linda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 2, 2013 at 9:46 AM thought provoking bl xx

Demetrios Trifiatis May 1, 2013 at 11:15 PM My friend this is a thought provoking HaiKu very well expressed!

Skat A May 1, 2013 at 2:55 PM wow! That's what I call LIFE! love the way we have to live one~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick May 1, 2013 at 2:04 PM Interesting Haiku that you have written to share with us..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always welcome..Sara