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One of These Days

One of these days I will write you a poem Perfectly stated I hope you will see Wonderful verses of love never ending Tender affections for you penned by me Melting your heart with the words I have written Making you smile with each line you read Rhyming emotions of springtime and flowers Sending the message you’re all that I need Phrases of beauty so filled with devotion Promised forever in poetic ways Something so special you’ll never forget me I will write that poem one of these days

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/10/2016 8:05:00 PM

And, me thinks, you just did write her THAT poem. A beauty, Chris, a simple and beautiful gem ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2016 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so much again my sweet friend. Your kind words are the best part of my day.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2016 4:15:00 PM

One of these days you'll write her that poem...and steal her heart away..Though on other days...nights..moments..you already wrote for her so many beauties..All you need to do is send them home by Christmas.Smile : ).Im gonna sound boring..but this deserves a fave..I really like it...because.it feels so direct andhonest..so another fave.

Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 5:13:00 PM

When I write a love poem like this my friend, it does come straight from my heart and it is always genuine and honest. I want my words to speak what I feel. I am so happy you could feel that in this poem. Your comments are always a source of happiness and inspiration to me. Thank you so much again

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/10/2016 8:38:00 AM

This is very special written straight from the heart and whoever receives the poem you plan to write ought to treasure it. As it will be one of a kind and beautifully written as your poetry is. :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 9:39:00 AM

Thanks for always sprinkling smiles on my page Heidi. I appreciate you my friend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/10/2016 8:15:00 AM

Great write, Chris. Perfectly penned:)

Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thanks so very much Daniel.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/10/2016 7:33:00 AM

Hi Chris, I don't understand you always write me good poetry that causes my heart to melt. This well written piece was no exception. Great job. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 7:53:00 AM

I guess I just like melting your heart Alexis. :) Thank you my sweet friend and #1 fan...ooops, shhhh. : )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/10/2016 6:01:00 AM

Oh, this is not fair, Chris, you already wrote it...by the way, can I fave this one??

Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 7:50:00 AM

You sure can. :) Thank you so much Jo. I am happy you liked this one.