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One of the Lucky Ones

Hope I'm not putting a big hex on myself But till now I've had no serious medical problems Don't know how many can say that at eighty-seventy But you can place me in the “fortunate” column Haven't done anything out of the ordinary Thinking maybe I've inherited some very good genes My whole family before me all lived to a ripe old age So what's this guy... a can of baked beans! Seven sisters all lived longer than eighty A pattern seems to have been established here Don't want to break the spell or cause any problems I'll just motor along and have another beer Don't think I'd like to be around at one hundred Soiling my jockeys and mumbling away Just wheel me out to the back veranda in the sun And forget me for a couple of days

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Date: 6/5/2023 3:42:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, Walking with a cane is good it gives xxx-ooo you support. The long life span runs in your family. Love, /Darlene/xxx-ooo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2023 11:08:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, Wow! This runs in your family. My husband passed at the age of 83. Love,\ Darlene/ xxxx-oooo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/6/2023 3:33:00 AM
Yes still cooking at 87! Halleluya! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 6/5/2023 10:21:00 AM
A great age to be Jack, keep going, the curtain is still up Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/5/2023 12:56:00 PM
25 is a whole lot better!!! Have a good one my good friend!
Date: 6/5/2023 6:58:00 AM
...wowza...goodness gracious andt a..... hmmm...another goodness gracious andt ...a qvestione'....you go for a walk every day?......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/5/2023 1:00:00 PM
Stopped driving about 4 years ago... never realized how much I relied on it!!!
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Sand Blown
Date: 6/5/2023 11:25:00 AM
...know what you mean....a cane's my companion too...we've a peddle exercise machine that helps....driving the car is now getting to be a labor.....oh well, can't drive forever......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/5/2023 8:20:00 AM
A my age I'm restricted somewhat but with the aid of a cane, I manage!!! Everyone makes it to this stage! Very sad... Have a happy day my friend!

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