One of Ten Offsprings

Seventy-nine years old and counting Got a whole bunch more years to come Longevity is rampant in my family I'm the youngest of ten children Nine sisters and finally li'l ole me Two died at birth... but One sister managed to make it to ninety-four Four lived into their eighties And two lived into their late seventies My mummy was eighty-two when she passed away But my poor dear old daddy only lived to sixty-seven Colon cancer got him Usually when hearing about nine sisters Most people say, “Wow! You must have been spoiled” What does that mean... like meat that's gone bad? I guess you could say I was doted on! Loved it... I recommend it! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 11/30/2014 3:29:00 PM
A warm amusing bio... loved it...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:39:00 PM
A true story from beginning to end! Only the names have been changed to protect the innocent! LOL
Date: 11/30/2014 9:37:00 AM
great write jack - my mum is also from long lived family in fact her great great aunt lived to 111 and 121 days and was in the guiness book of records - here is to a long and health life Jack :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:47:00 PM
yes it was in the 70's when she died Jack - I never met her:-( Mums brother is 96 and her sister 88:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:42:00 PM
WOWSERS! 111 and in the Guiness Book of Records! Hope I've a bunch more years but I don't think I'll be challenging THAT record! Thanks Sis... love and hugs, Brother Jack XXX
Date: 11/30/2014 7:51:00 AM
Jack... We'll be your family now. We all seem to go from the youngest to the oldest leader of the family... My Great Aunt died at 107. My Greatgrandfather at 97. We either die young or live very old.... I would have been one of the young ones, but got a pacemaker... LOVE technology... Can't imagine why?... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2014 8:14:00 AM
Uh, let me explain... you see, your pacemaker has extended your life! NOW do you understand? Have a great Sunday, dear Carol! XXXX
Date: 11/30/2014 7:17:00 AM
Hello my dear friend Jack! Wonderful pen here! Enjoyed it very much your poem. I pray God, lets you live till you are, at least 125 yrs. Continue enjoying life! Smile! A 7 for me! Have a very lovely Sunday! :) love and hugs! xxx D.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2014 7:25:00 AM
My heart races whenever I see your name, my dear "Lady Love"! Thanks for the encouragement! With sweeties like you here on the Soup, I have much to live for and to keep me going! Big squeezies and much love, Jack XXX
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