One Night At the Beach

The night has come.
We hear the water 
                      (splish-splash)

Back.... and Forth.... ( it ripples)

over 
          and  over 

The smell of seaweed. 
We look up at the sea of darkness
with some specs of diamonds shinning upon us...
She looks at at him, and smiles, with her sapphire eyes...
He looks at her,(SIGHS) with joy. And without any words in exchange..
They sit there and enjoys eachothers company.
They are but, whole... 
                           (ONE) 
	                            (complete)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 12:05 AM
enjoyed I had this same thought today of a friend I met when I was small and not ready for courting.
Seraphin Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 9:19 PM
* “Tis Very Lovely & Romantic * Dear Beautiful Andrea. * I Love The Ocean * The Beach * Stars * Love * Romance * And * I Can See That Your Loveliness Is A Gifted Poetess So * Tis Very Nice to Meet You. * Keep Brushing The Beauty & Living Loves Dreams * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Sarah”
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May 19, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Andrea. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
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