Jack Horne Poet Verse

One Night

Alone, she noticed footsteps.
Her heart thumping, pulse racing,
She looked over her shoulder.
A hulking dark shape. A man.
She walked faster. So did he.
Heavy breathing. Smell of beer.
Her heart missed a beat.  He pounced…

Jack Horne, 9th November, for Nette’s Silhouette of a Heptagonet contest

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Paul Callus November 25, 2014 at 3:59 PM Great build-up, Jack! Looking forward to part two!! ...but it does not have to end the way we are expecting! // paul

Meg Anderson November 19, 2014 at 12:57 PM I love the way it leaves you hanging...

Victoria Anderson-Throop November 17, 2014 at 11:05 PM alistic and frightening...The fear of every night i have ever lived in a city. That is my phobia! You have certainly captured it I am back online again. Victoria

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 10, 2014 at 10:01 AM Wow, terrifying Jack! One of my worst fears told. Good luck in Nette's contest...love and blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2014 at 12:22 AM oh, Jack, leave it to you to do a stalker or vampire type poem on night theme. You are so funny!! By the way, the dog I wrote of was Ollyver, my best loved doggie that I had to give up years ago. It is definitely not that crazy Snickers!!

Robert Johnson November 9, 2014 at 11:18 PM Interesting how the format plays out. You did awesome with it. I'm ready for chapter two. I hope she took one of those self defense classes and beats the @#%$&@$, sorry, got carried away. :) Peace. :)

Eve Roper November 9, 2014 at 6:35 PM I walk my dog, I hope when the time arrives he will protect me. Good write Jack :) hugs eve

Shadow Hamilton November 9, 2014 at 5:35 PM the fear creeps of the page then wham right between the eyes Jack really good pen gl in contest glad you enjoyed mine hugs

Jan Allison November 9, 2014 at 3:25 PM wow Jack I love your take on the theme - this should do really well for you - had me hooked from the start to the end:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick November 9, 2014 at 3:00 PM Very exciting Heptagonet which reads like a winner...Way to go..Such difference in the interperation of the picture..I have read some interesting ones today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara