One Morn

As the morn's sun shines through the pines
Then tries to hideand behind clouds slide.
Gray clouds amass and with wispy clouds twine
Astride fog and damp ride the rollingtide  

PINES upon moisture DINE with PRIDE
Lifting silhouetted arms HIGH
Needles with the sky secrets CONFIDE
About the love of the great ADONAI

The beauty present Amplified
By the sky's canvas painted FINE.
A master painter has BEAUTIFIED
When viewing SKY, reach for cloud NINE

This day I would not MODIFY
As the SKY changes with each SCAN
My heart flies and with Him ALLIES
My soul His blessings quickly SPAN

Since this morning softly BEGAN
With Whip-Poor-Will's cadence so SHRILL
Much has passed and changes in PLANS
Beyond the Dove's sweet coo high on the HILL

Across the yard a stand of PECAN
Blackbirds and crows MILL in this morn's STILL
Not much I'd rather have THAN
A morn of peace and quiet for my soul's FILL

As a slight breeze stirs the ceiling FANS
The windchimes echo their hollow SOUND
From bamboo's depth's to metal BLAN
Nothing to match the baying HOUND

The rolling GROUND, to the creek BOUNDS
Where life CIRCLES, then the creek PULLS
The raging water flows wild with RESOUNDS
Those waters rush 'til  the ocean is  FULL


unfinished..........


shines    
pines
behind
twine
dine
fine
nine

hide
slide
astride
ride
tide
pride
confide
amplified
beautified

high
Adonai
sky
modify
allies

scan
span
began 
plans
pecan(can be pronounced pe can or pe con)
than
fans
blan 


shrill 
hill
mill
still
fill

sound
hound
ground
bound
resounds

circle
full 
pull
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Maverick Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Loved reading the inspiration in this Sara keep well Joe..'
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:32 AM
- Sara, so unique and beautiful - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 7:09 PM
this one caught my eye, then took my mind, on a wild little ride, through the pines!
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 1:46 PM
ohhh what a great creation...such terrific wording with defined rhymes, sara.. looking forward to its final draft.. huggs
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