One More Try

One more try


            At the  beginning,
            I thought to myself,
            we will last
            we will end up together, 
            But I see now,
            we are not perfect
            we are not soul mates,
            as I look at us
            I was day dreaming
            that we will pull through
            that we will make it work,
            but,
            we shattered like dropped mirrors,
            leaving me confused,
            searching for us.
            At the beginning
            your heart and mine
            they searched for each other,
            we wanted to make it last
            to last longer then a life time.
            Now I see
            we are not mean to be
            or,
            is it still a hope
            is there anything else
            left to explore
            to give it a try one more time
 
Ivy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Desai Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 12:15 AM
so very true, always worth another try...
Loving Iii Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:56 AM
i live in a land of one more tries. time heals all wounds and forgiving comes with forgetfullness. so it's al ways good to give it one more try.
Grisetti Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Two hearts that search for each other should always take one more try. Loved this.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Luck in love to you...hope it goes well. - oxox Anne-Lise
Vresk Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 6:15 PM
lol ha ha ha this is sweetest comment I have ever get,thank you dear friend,Ivy
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