One more try

How could you just leave me, 
With no explanation why,
It feels like you deceived me, 
Not giving me one more try,

Was it something that I said or something I didn't do?
For the love that we shared, 
Our souls that we beared,
Seem all just words to you,

You're the thought between every thought,
You consume me every day,
Believed no problem we couldn't sort,
You just need to show the way,

Consider bringing me back, 
For you anything I will supply, 
My forever lasting, undying love, 
If you'd just give me one more try.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Meadows Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:18 AM
A good poem. Well done.
Gifford Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Beautifully written.
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