One More Try

Love hurts, that is true
I can't imagine my life without you
They say when time flows it's like water
Hold onto the chance, cos' it's now or never
But just like water, 
holding you was impossible-- there's just no way
I tried to hold onto you but you still slipped away
In our love story anyone could see
How fate is cruel for you and me
Others say love is sweeter on the second time around
But the heart and trust given to you once, you repeatedly broken down
Is it just me or it's really getting out of hand
Was it because our love sank like a quicksand
Now that I moved forward
You came back
My heart you re-shattered 
Piece by piece it cracked
Funny how I still question why were we ended hastily
Your love, it lasted once, but we didn't end happily
That night you left, it brought me sorrow
Can't believe again you've made me cry
Now, Our love, Tell me
Does it deserve One More Try?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/10/2018 8:05:00 AM
Chase, a heartfelt write. Sometimes good things fall apart so that the right things can fall into place. They say if it's meant to be let her go, and she will return... Great poem! Welcome to the soup!!
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Date: 3/8/2018 6:45:00 AM
Great first post Chase, welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 3/8/2018 7:54:00 AM
really? thank you :))
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