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One More Time

When the time comes for me to go and I know not what my fate may be, let me have one final moment Lord to breathe in the peony. Let me walk the trail to Mingo Falls, and hear the thunder roar one more time. When my last day has arrived and I must say goodbye, Let me hear the sweet, sweet laughter of my children one last time. Let them feel the joy in my heart as they kiss me before I part one more time. When it is time to close the pages of the book of life for me, let me write just one more poem that will last eternally. Let me leave a lasting token of this passion I hold dear one more time. When I take my final bow on the stage of God’s green earth, may I leave a lasting legacy to reveal what life is worth. May the ones whom I hold dearly know how much they meant to me as they read through all these pages one more time…

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Date: 1/15/2019 8:14:00 PM
This is a very moving and beautiful piece. Brought a tear to my eyes. Marked it as a favorite. :)
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/15/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Michael! You made my day!
Date: 1/14/2019 7:08:00 AM
This is beautiful, Susan. This line resonates in my soul's heart: "let me write just one more poem that will last eternally." I am always feeling this. When I write a poem, I think will this be the one? It never is, which is why I keep writing, striving toward THAT one.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/14/2019 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Caren. I am almost 70. I have been writing poetry since I was a teen. I lost count of how many poems I've written, but it's over 500. I will keep writing as long as I can breathe. Thanks again Caren.
Date: 1/12/2019 10:26:00 PM
Nicely written. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/13/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Valerie. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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