Kash Poet Poet Romanticism

One More Peg

One more peg
to quench my thirst,
thirst of a desert
nearer to sea
so close to it
yet so far.

One more peg
to forget the pain,
pain of my heart
which I once
offered to you
but you refused.

One more peg
to end this poem,
a poem of love,
love that is lost,
lost in time
never to come.

Just one m o r e pe.......




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placement:10 th, (July  2011)

Contest:Anything Goes

Sponsor:Irma Linda Trevino

By:kashinath karmakar(18th January,2011)

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Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2011 at 1:17 AM Kash, that was my partner's line that you referred to. I think some Americans count twinkling as three syllables. I assume they are counting twink le ing. However, in the midewest and west, we just say it like twink ling.

Debbie Guzzi July 19, 2011 at 1:55 PM Now you must tell me...peg? You know there was an old song called Pegg a my Heart? Do you mean like she's putting a nail/peg in your heart? dreamily romantic...Congrad's Light & Love

Jack Horne July 19, 2011 at 11:35 AM Many congrats on your win, Kash : )

Wilma Neels July 19, 2011 at 10:11 AM Kash, I just love the ending.. Congratulations on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 19, 2011 at 8:30 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.d., kaSHINATH

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2011 at 4:55 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest "Anything Goes" Kashinath. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2011 at 4:46 AM Congrats Kash on a spectacular win for splendid poetry my friend..sorry for late congrats but system was not cooperating late last night and got frustrated waiting for validate key to work..but TPS is adapting new system shortly..yeah..luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 25, 2011 at 7:39 AM the way you ended this sure reinforced your poem pretty well, Kashinath! Enjoyed this and of how you let the thoughts flow-- the second line's last word leading to the first word of the third line--very cool-- keep on adding more pe..... ;)

Nette Onclaud January 21, 2011 at 8:17 AM whooa... an endless ream of flourishing thoughts, kashinath.. i heart this!! :)hugggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich January 19, 2011 at 9:46 PM Kashinath, this is a beautiful write from you. WAs it for a contest? I saved you for last tonight and then I'm outta here to go make late cookies in my kitchen. Let me answer that soupmail and see what else I was gonna look at!

Michael J. Falotico January 19, 2011 at 2:39 PM I agree a fav. of mine too.... such great poetry from you...thank you for sharing...always Michael

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2011 at 1:10 PM How I love the way you ended this poem, Kashinath. There is always another peg, another river to cross, another mountain to come. It seems we never completely reach our destinations. Excellent poem for my favorites. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 19, 2011 at 6:13 AM Deep and emotional lines Kashinath .. romance brings this out in a poet.. u have penned so beautifully my friend.. the inner feelings of your heart and soul..with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 19, 2011 at 2:53 AM You have made quite a nice use of oxymorons in this write, kashinath. short and sweet expressions