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One More Morning

A cool still morning
Down where songbirds sing
Close to swift creek's flowing
And dove's notes ring

A sun slowly rises
Casting cobalt blue on clouds
Against sky's horizon
A gentle morning proud

Charcoal gray fluffy clouds
Dot the sky so blue
As a golden sun warms shroud
That above cobalt stew

A beautiful morning 
Presents art so fine
The birds for food roaming
Upon bugs graciously dine

While the poet entertains
Day's chores and meals looming
Just a few minutes to gain
Spirit's fill and remove glooming 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kerr Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 11:06 PM
This is a lustrous portrayal of the morning and things associated with it. I also loved the rhyme scheme. Wonderful, Sara. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Your review was uplifting and supportive, Howard. I appreciate you reading this one. Sara K.
Nigros Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 5:16 AM
Is a Beautiful Morning indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful piece.
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 5:23 AM
Patrick, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara
Da Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:53 AM
This is as beautiful as the morning being described. Really refreshing piece..
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Karen, Thanks for the visit to my page. I am glad that you found this work refreshing. Sara
Shariff Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 11:31 PM
Such a musical and rhyming poem on lovely morning with stunning imagery. Great write, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Irfanulla, Your comment is uplifting ..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Horsman Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Love the way your poetry creates a footpath through each line. this one like so many others, a wonderful read.
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Harry, Your visits to my page always encourage me. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Barden Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 12:41 AM
Oh, so exquisitely charming and whimsical, Sara, and it put a (much needed) big smile on my face. Lovely imagery and description, perfect rhythm and flow, and phrasing that fits the topic sublimely! Wonderful write, and I am adding to favs. Blessings! :-) <3
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Gregory, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to leave an uplifting comment. I am glad that the poem put a smile on your face. Sara
Michael Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Lovely imagery in a peaceful poem...Nice write Sara
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Arturo, Your presence at my work is uplifting. I am glad that you found lovely imagery in the work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Vaso Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 11:56 PM
I love the picture you paint with your words, for me such a lovely and soothing poem!!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Arthur, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. Sara
Horn Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Ourselves entertain we must do, So we can become one of the few, Poems write, Day and night; To God always are sure to be true.
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 8:34 AM
James, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting. Sara
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 3:24 PM
such stunning imagery Sara i feel a sense of peace reading your lovely lines:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Jan, Awesome that you could feel a sense of peace. I usually feel peaceful out on the porch. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Lovely scenes Sara...
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Charlie, Your comments are uplifting. Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:42 PM
how lucent is you morning blessed by nature's wonders, sara... so good to have read this... stay well; huggs
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Nette, Thanks for your kind review of my work. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Hi Sara, all is well with me. I'm just working too many days. There seems no time to write, EAT, work, rest, eat repeat. I'm glad you are well & happily still writing! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Debbie, Awesome that all is well with you. It is also good that you have a job and are able to work that job. Sometimes life seems like it is one continuous routine. I hope that you get to write some soon. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the visit. Sara
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