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One More Moment

If I had one more moment,To say how I feel I would tell you to come back because none of this feels real. I would hug you, and never let go oh I miss you more than you will ever know. I would tell you I love you each and every day and check on you to see if you are ok. If I had one more moment. To spend with you we would go fishin on the big ocean blue. We would tell stories about how you made me laugh all the time, it's crazy how for you I can make a little rhyme. I wouldn't let not one word go unsaid, I would tell you exactly what's in my head If I had one more moment, I wouldn't just yet tell you goodbye because just the thought that I would have to makes me cry. I would tell you to stay a little longer there is still so much more for you to discover Like the day you give me away. Or the day you meet your grandbabies and spoil them with all sorts of candies If I had one more moment I would tell you exactly what you mean to me I would tell you that you've made me so happy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/19/2012 8:39:00 AM
Heartfelt poem here!!
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Date: 2/22/2012 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Tiffany. Love, Carol
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Tiffany Rowe
Date: 2/22/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you I'm really happy about it :)
Date: 2/20/2012 6:32:00 AM
A beautiful and sensitive poem Tiffany, thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Tiffany Rowe
Date: 2/20/2012 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise:)
Date: 2/18/2012 9:16:00 PM
beautiful write ,love felt is amazing,
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Tiffany Rowe
Date: 2/19/2012 1:18:00 PM
thank you very much for your comment
Date: 8/26/2011 8:51:00 PM
wonderful tribute write, light & love
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:09:00 PM
Touching and heart felt. Welcome the soup and thanks for sharing! Steve
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:41:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this beautiful work..I will send you soup mail in a few minutes..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:40:00 PM
Hello Tiffany, What a beautiful tribute you have written here. Your words are sad however you have shown such love and you have wonderful memories.... As Always, Shar
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