One More Mile

One more laugh
One more cry
Another moment passes by
One more life 
One more death
Many blessings with each breath
One more memory
One more smile
That has carried us through one more mile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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November 19, 2008 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alana. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2008 at 2:23 PM
Alana, Heartiest congratulations on your beautiful poem being featured this week. Mohammad
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November 18, 2008 at 1:13 PM
Alana this short poem is excellent - Congrats on having it featured - God Bless, MJ
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November 18, 2008 at 4:07 AM
A very meaningful write Alana. Hopeful and truthful. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra
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November 18, 2008 at 3:15 AM
Congrats! sweet, right to the point, Great reminder... Take care, D.
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November 17, 2008 at 3:04 PM
I'm thankful for those blessings. Smiles sure can brighten the load. Much said in this concise poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Karen
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November 17, 2008 at 10:21 AM
Lana Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura
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November 17, 2008 at 10:17 AM
Congrats Alana, on "One More Mile" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Hope all is well. God Bless. Vince
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November 16, 2008 at 11:50 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week Lana.One of your best & one for my favourites list I thinkRgds Brian
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