One More Day

One more day is behind us,
lost for ever in the ocean of life,
quietly as it can be,
as lonely streets with no one to walk with,
street lights are  the only witnesses,
lighting the way to my home,
as I walk down the road,
my heart is crying
deep inside the chest
calling your name,
but you...........
you're def, 
where are you,
who knows that?

One more day is over,
gone for ever,
lost for ever in the ocean of life,
you,
but you,
where things went wrong for us,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Desai Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 7:01 AM
life is now, this moment, not tomorrow, not yesterday,this very moment,live it dont leave it...nice write but saddens me to think what might provoke such words
Kearley Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 3:16 PM
:*( Just think of me,and I'll be there :o)
Vresk Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 8:34 PM
thank you fear Dan, Ivy
Palmer Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 4:44 PM
sad write no use wasting and counting the days,if it can't be fixed,move on,sorry Ismeta
Vresk Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 8:35 PM
every cloud has a silver line,thank you for stopping by.Ivy
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:42 PM
A moving - but very good written poem - like it. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
Vresk Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 8:37 PM
thank you so very much dear Ann Lisa,Ivy
May Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:57 PM
nicely written ismeta
Vresk Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 8:38 PM
dear Joseph Thank you for stopping by Ivy
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