Get Your Premium Membership

One More Day

One more day is behind us, lost for ever in the ocean of life, quietly as it can be, as lonely streets with no one to walk with, street lights are the only witnesses, lighting the way to my home, as I walk down the road, my heart is crying deep inside the chest calling your name, but you........... you're def, where are you, who knows that? One more day is over, gone for ever, lost for ever in the ocean of life, you, but you, where things went wrong for us,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/19/2012 7:01:00 AM
life is now, this moment, not tomorrow, not yesterday,this very moment,live it dont leave it...nice write but saddens me to think what might provoke such words
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2012 3:16:00 PM
:*( Just think of me,and I'll be there :o)
Login to Reply
Vresk Avatar
Ivy Vresk
Date: 8/29/2012 8:34:00 PM
thank you fear Dan, Ivy
Date: 8/23/2012 4:44:00 PM
sad write no use wasting and counting the days,if it can't be fixed,move on,sorry Ismeta
Login to Reply
Vresk Avatar
Ivy Vresk
Date: 8/29/2012 8:35:00 PM
every cloud has a silver line,thank you for stopping by.Ivy
Date: 8/21/2012 3:42:00 PM
A moving - but very good written poem - like it. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Vresk Avatar
Ivy Vresk
Date: 8/29/2012 8:37:00 PM
thank you so very much dear Ann Lisa,Ivy
Date: 8/20/2012 2:57:00 PM
nicely written ismeta
Login to Reply
Vresk Avatar
Ivy Vresk
Date: 8/29/2012 8:38:00 PM
dear Joseph Thank you for stopping by Ivy

Book: Reflection on the Important Things