Jenish Somadas Poet Sijo

One More

How I wish to live a life, like any child of naughty five
Cry and smile with an empty heart, and sleep at night without hurts
Ah! how many springs passed through me, still I longed to have one more.

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Funom Makama June 8, 2020 at 9:04 PM Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece! Jenish Somadas June 9, 2020 at 12:23 AM Thank you Funom..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 3, 2020 at 5:14 AM How admirable a wish it is my friend, Jenish. Certainly the heart envies such innocence! Beautiful writing. Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 5, 2020 at 12:33 AM Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words..

Gershon Wolf May 30, 2020 at 11:37 PM Ha, ha. It certainly looks innocent... Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:23 AM Where I lost my innocence? Maybe under the dirty pile of memories.. Takecare Gershon..

Aditi Mishra May 30, 2020 at 1:02 PM I miss being a child too! Those days were so simple. Lovely words Jenish :) Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:20 AM I miss too..Under the wings of healthy parents, I want to run once more without fear.. Thank you..

Shirley Hawkins May 29, 2020 at 12:32 AM A lovely poem. I wrote a poem called"I wish I could be a child again" as there's nothing more pure and innocent as a child so beautifully captured in your poem Jenish. That's why we don't want our children to grow up too quickly... Jenish Somadas May 29, 2020 at 12:36 AM True..But you are so lucky to have childhood 6 times..

Vijay Pandit May 28, 2020 at 7:22 AM Oh, the joy of innocence in childhood! Beautifully done, Jenish. Jenish Somadas May 29, 2020 at 12:34 AM Thank you Vijay..