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One Moment In the Morning

Through the brambles of the arbor's vine, an artist has spinned some silver lace This net was cradled over leaves slung low, and wet with dew. Evidence was left in place, a hammock swings as if on cue Crocheted with skill and flair to glisten in the sun Breeze trembles every curl and lair and takes the breath from you Light fondles strands of pearls it wears as the spider rests, .. to view. While the agile trace of light declines, the fragile morning soon unwinds and wears a lace of new design
........................................................ 2/25/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Delaney Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Came back to read this favorite of mine. Have a wonderful day. Luv, SuZ
Fiery Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Congrats my dear ! Some poets can just create magic by just writing few lines.. You are one of them.. Brilliant... 7/7hugs Red
Kroll Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 4:33 PM
You have said so much in just a few lines. Congrats!
A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~
Milliner Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie!!
Delaney Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations. How beautiful, Carrie: Love this fragment of life. I am FAV'ing it. Cheers, SuZ
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Beautiful victory. Congratulations Carrie
A. Sharma Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 10:08 PM
really wonderful Carrie.. congrats on top podium.
Jameson Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful use of your words, Carrie-- a swirling design of description..I'm sure the web looked beautiful too! Congrats on your placement!
Gentry Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Awesome! Great way to capture the theme by using nature. Congratulations on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 3:26 PM
this is sweet and pretty. Love it, and congrats on the well deserved win.
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Carrie, this is unique congratulations on the “Fragment Of Life” contest a 7 and a fav. : ) Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:28 PM
beautifully woven Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:31 AM
I love where you took your theme as a 'fragment of life' Carrie. Indeed it is! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Carrie, lovely poem...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Chircop Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Just beautifully weaved dear !
Peterson Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:35 PM
You have spun here a marvel for yourself, verse matching the innate skill of spiders. Poetic.
Tudor Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 11:35 AM
You have excellently and skillfully described one of nature's wondrous events. Beauty personified.
Mark Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Exceptional visual write,
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