One Mistake Cost Many Tears

Oh that I had shunned his first embrace.
And turned away his luscious kiss.
Too young to understand love,
Afraid to feel him near,
Filled with emotion.
He took control.
Dreams rampant.
Thinking 
Love.

I should have dated other people.
Instead I clung to only him.
Like a lamb to the slaughter,
I followed him to sin.
Self-respect was lost.
My values crushed.
Love in force.
Ashamed.
Bad.

I should have gone to port with girlfriends.
My “perfect match” they said, was there.
My soul mate docked near, that year.
Young, handsome, and gifted –
That meeting drifted.
Missed at Ft. Bragg,
And Texas.
But now,
We…

© September 20, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:12 PM
A sad one, but now your life is full, right, Dane Ann? Congrats with this fine win. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 11:52 AM
lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Freeman Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations Dane on your worthy poem's place in top ten. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent entry... appreciate your constant support always with luv...
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Very good one Dane! and I love the questioning ending and you are getting more and more emotion into your writes. You go gal! Light & Love
Henderson Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 6:55 AM
A very nice poem to read this morning Dane- tho it sounds sad. Charles
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September 19, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 9:07 AM
lovely , good luck in the contest
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