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One Mistake Cost Many Tears

Oh that I had shunned his first embrace. And turned away his luscious kiss. Too young to understand love, Afraid to feel him near, Filled with emotion. He took control. Dreams rampant. Thinking Love. I should have dated other people. Instead I clung to only him. Like a lamb to the slaughter, I followed him to sin. Self-respect was lost. My values crushed. Love in force. Ashamed. Bad. I should have gone to port with girlfriends. My “perfect match” they said, was there. My soul mate docked near, that year. Young, handsome, and gifted – That meeting drifted. Missed at Ft. Bragg, And Texas. But now, We… © September 20, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 10/7/2010 9:12:00 PM
A sad one, but now your life is full, right, Dane Ann? Congrats with this fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/6/2010 11:52:00 AM
lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 5:42:00 PM
Congratulations Dane on your worthy poem's place in top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:27:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent entry... appreciate your constant support always with luv...
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Date: 9/24/2010 8:01:00 PM
Very good one Dane! and I love the questioning ending and you are getting more and more emotion into your writes. You go gal! Light & Love
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:55:00 AM
A very nice poem to read this morning Dane- tho it sounds sad. Charles
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:57:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 9:07:00 AM
lovely , good luck in the contest
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