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Taming the primitive mind -- a most difficult human endeavor. July 15, 2016 Give me your best one liner - Poetry Contest

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/2/2019 12:47:00 PM

Hello Tom Arnone, so nice to meet you. I have just finished reading your poem.Yes i do agree to tame the human mind is difficult thing to do, Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/28/2016 6:00:00 PM

great one liner Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Arnone
Date: 7/28/2016 6:44:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. :-)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/23/2016 2:28:00 AM

I understand your predicament, lol. Congrats Tom, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Tom Arnone
Date: 7/23/2016 7:20:00 AM

Do you, Teddy? ;-) Thanks!

David De La Croes

Date: 7/21/2016 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the one-liner contest, Tom. Facing reality can be a frightening experience for some people, so they remain in the primitiveness" of their comfort zone. Go well, David

Tom Arnone
Date: 7/23/2016 7:24:00 AM

I wouldn't have put it exactly that way -- I was referring to taming our baser, reptilian impulses. Thanks for the congrats. :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 3:06:00 PM

can you imagine Anne Sullivan trying to work with Helen Keller before the light of love came to her? So true! Congrats on the win

Tom Arnone
Date: 7/19/2016 3:11:00 PM

You have to tame yourself first (substitute love) before you can tame another. Thanks, Andrea. :-)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/17/2016 10:22:00 PM

Congrats! my friend Tom...very well done...god bless...^WW^

Tom Arnone
Date: 7/17/2016 10:25:00 PM

Thanks, W. W.

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 4:58:00 PM

Tom, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Tom Arnone
Date: 7/17/2016 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, S. A. :-)