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Taming the primitive mind -- a most difficult human endeavor.

July 15, 2016
Give me your best one liner - Poetry Contest

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Darlene De Beaulieu

May 2, 2019 at 12:47 PM

Hello Tom Arnone, so nice to meet you. I have just finished reading your poem.Yes i do agree to tame the human mind is difficult thing to do, Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

July 28, 2016 at 6:00 PM

great one liner Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Arnone

July 28, 2016 at 6:44 PM

Thanks, Jan. :-)

Teddy Kimathi

July 23, 2016 at 2:28 AM

I understand your predicament, lol. Congrats Tom, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Tom Arnone

July 23, 2016 at 7:20 AM

Do you, Teddy? ;-) Thanks!

David De La Croes

July 21, 2016 at 3:03 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the one-liner contest, Tom. Facing reality can be a frightening experience for some people, so they remain in the primitiveness" of their comfort zone. Go well, David

Tom Arnone

July 23, 2016 at 7:24 AM

I wouldn't have put it exactly that way -- I was referring to taming our baser, reptilian impulses. Thanks for the congrats. :-)