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One Liners Two

As if atonement for the fierceness of a storm, it bequeaths a glorious rainbow. One Liners Two for Silent One 12/7/2015

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Tammy Reams

Date: 12/9/2015 5:51:00 PM

I love the way you put this together Nette! Congrats on your win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/7/2015 3:31:00 PM

An excellent one-liner, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/7/2015 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/7/2015 12:28:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write nette!

John Lawless

Date: 12/6/2015 8:10:00 PM

B E A U T I F U L.....well deserved placement Nette

Len Gasun

Date: 12/6/2015 7:51:00 PM

So beautiful and inspiring my dear friend, Nette! Many Warm Congrats on your win! Hugs and Cheers! How are you my dear friend? This is my last day of vacation, and then back to school tomorrow. So I'm trying to enjoy my fave hobbies as if no more day (lol) like painting, gardening, piano and especially poetry. I'm looking forward for another vacation again. Hope to hear from you soon! Take care, God bless and have a wonderful week! CONGRATULATIONS AGAIN! <3 Leonora

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/6/2015 6:51:00 PM

I'm digging this one liner business. Very effective, Nette - another one liner that is 'food' for thought and I think that's what they are all about. Great wording ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 6:26:00 PM

You should call this one Sky!! Very nice, Nette. Congrats.

James Inman

Date: 12/6/2015 6:12:00 PM

Yin and yang, nice write Nette.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/6/2015 2:44:00 PM

Nette, this is beautiful! Congratulations on your winning write it was deserved:-) Alexis

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/6/2015 2:40:00 PM

Lovely, Nette! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 2:18:00 PM

Nette, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Lu Loo

Date: 12/6/2015 2:18:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win Nette! *smiles*

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 2:15:00 PM

calm and beautiful after a storm - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 2:10:00 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, Nette !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/6/2015 1:43:00 PM

Nature has the power to be a harsh mistress, but she also has a more tender side to her, and thus she comes with a coloured peaceful offering. Atonement fits perfectly. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 1:09:00 PM

- A joy to see a glorious rainbow after a storm .... great, Nette ! - good luck in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Datu

Date: 12/6/2015 12:19:00 PM

Your words are so enlightening here, my friend! Rainbows are such profound and special gifts from Mother Earth.I enjoyed this so much.

Norma Arana

Date: 12/6/2015 11:31:00 AM

I find this to be symbolic. We struggle and then,rise high brighter than a rainbow! Your creativity fills me up!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/6/2015 11:22:00 AM

It is a fabulous sight after a big storm.

Carly Lalion

Date: 12/6/2015 10:46:00 AM

Indeed, Mother Nature showers us with rapture after a rage. Thank you for this eloquently accomplished poem!