One Liners Two

As if atonement for the fierceness of a storm, it bequeaths a glorious rainbow.


One Liners Two for Silent One
12/7/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 9, 2015 at 5:51 PM
I love the way you put this together Nette! Congrats on your win!
Merryman Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 3:31 PM
An excellent one-liner, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Negron Flores Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:28 AM
Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write nette!
Lawless Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:10 PM
B E A U T I F U L.....well deserved placement Nette
Gasun Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 7:51 PM
So beautiful and inspiring my dear friend, Nette! Many Warm Congrats on your win! Hugs and Cheers! How are you my dear friend? This is my last day of vacation, and then back to school tomorrow. So I'm trying to enjoy my fave hobbies as if no more day (lol) like painting, gardening, piano and especially poetry. I'm looking forward for another vacation again. Hope to hear from you soon! Take care, God bless and have a wonderful week! CONGRATULATIONS AGAIN! <3 Leonora
Godwin Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 6:51 PM
I'm digging this one liner business. Very effective, Nette - another one liner that is 'food' for thought and I think that's what they are all about. Great wording ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 6:26 PM
You should call this one Sky!! Very nice, Nette. Congrats.
Inman Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Yin and yang, nice write Nette.
Y. Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Nette, this is beautiful! Congratulations on your winning write it was deserved:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Lovely, Nette! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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December 6, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Nette, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT
Scars Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Nette! *smiles*
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:15 PM
calm and beautiful after a storm - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:10 PM
- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, Nette !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Nature has the power to be a harsh mistress, but she also has a more tender side to her, and thus she comes with a coloured peaceful offering. Atonement fits perfectly. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 1:09 PM
- A joy to see a glorious rainbow after a storm .... great, Nette ! - good luck in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Datu Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Your words are so enlightening here, my friend! Rainbows are such profound and special gifts from Mother Earth.I enjoyed this so much.
Arana Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:31 AM
I find this to be symbolic. We struggle and then,rise high brighter than a rainbow! Your creativity fills me up!
Smith Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:22 AM
It is a fabulous sight after a big storm.
Lalion Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Indeed, Mother Nature showers us with rapture after a rage. Thank you for this eloquently accomplished poem!
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