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Spongy Craters spongy craters on corroded hearts-soaking love December 4, 2015 Contest: One Liner Sponsor: Silent One

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Grace Mutindi

Date: 12/7/2015 9:24:00 AM

Hi Balveen...this is creative...love it. Congrats on your placement!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 10:10:00 AM

Glad you like it Grace! Thanks for the visit and appreciation!

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/5/2015 10:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Balveen! Love, Kim

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 11:41:00 PM

Thanks Kim! Love.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 6:59:00 PM

I enjoyed this one, Balveen. Congrats for your win.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 11:42:00 PM

Your compliments mean a lot Andrea! Please do correct me where necessary. Love, Balveen

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/5/2015 6:22:00 PM

Congratulations Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 11:43:00 PM

Thanks Nayda!

Lu Loo

Date: 12/5/2015 1:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win! :)-lu *Smiles

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 11:44:00 PM

When I read Loo I thought this is a third Laura in PS. Thanks! Love....

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 12:48:00 PM

Balveen..... Lovely win.... Love Skat

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 11:45:00 PM

Skats, thanks ever so much! Love....

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 12:29:00 PM

Great one liner congrats Balveen:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Yours was far better! Love, Balveen

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2015 8:19:00 AM

Great job, Balveen,congratulations on your win!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 10:17:00 AM

Thanks ever so much Eve!

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/5/2015 7:56:00 AM

:-) interesting and fun descriptive line.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thank- you Casarah!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2015 1:18:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 3:02:00 AM

Thanks Richard!