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Spongy Craters



spongy craters on corroded hearts-soaking love


December 4, 2015
Contest: One Liner
Sponsor: Silent One

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Grace Mutindi

December 7, 2015 at 9:24 AM

Hi Balveen...this is creative...love it. Congrats on your placement!

Balveen Cheema

December 7, 2015 at 10:10 AM

Glad you like it Grace! Thanks for the visit and appreciation!

Kim Merryman

December 5, 2015 at 10:40 PM

Congrats on your win, Balveen! Love, Kim

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 11:41 PM

Thanks Kim! Love.....

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2015 at 6:59 PM

I enjoyed this one, Balveen. Congrats for your win.

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 11:42 PM

Your compliments mean a lot Andrea! Please do correct me where necessary. Love, Balveen

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 5, 2015 at 6:22 PM

Congratulations Balveen.

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 11:43 PM

Thanks Nayda!

Beautiful Scars

December 5, 2015 at 1:22 PM

Congrats on your win! :)-lu *Smiles

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 11:44 PM

When I read Loo I thought this is a third Laura in PS. Thanks! Love....

Skat A

December 5, 2015 at 12:48 PM

Balveen..... Lovely win.... Love Skat

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Skats, thanks ever so much! Love....

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 12:29 PM

Great one liner congrats Balveen:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 12:45 PM

Thanks Jan! Yours was far better! Love, Balveen

Eve Roper

December 5, 2015 at 8:19 AM

Great job, Balveen,congratulations on your win!

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 10:17 AM

Thanks ever so much Eve!

Casarah Nance

December 5, 2015 at 7:56 AM

:-) interesting and fun descriptive line.

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 10:16 AM

Thank- you Casarah!

Richard Lamoureux

December 5, 2015 at 1:18 AM

Good luck in the contest Balveen.

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 3:02 AM

Thanks Richard!

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