One Kimo

twilight holds her artisan silhouette- delicate afterglow as constellations ascend October 8, 2016
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Nance Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Beautifully said :) grats on your win
Dutta Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Great congrats Laura to win on your wonderful piece. Hugs
Van Der Merwe Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really am in awe of your writing Luloo - I can and will learn a lot from poets of your caliber. Congratulations on your placement Regards, Mark
Lawless Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Well done Laura, congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:24 PM
GOOD for you with a great win, Laura. Nice seeing this one again.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Sweet kimo luloo. Takes you out of this realm in feelings. Congratulations on your placement.
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:51 PM
I love this Kimo, Laura, and in my mind I can feel that delicate afterglow! Congratulations on this high placement:) Regards // paul
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:10 PM
thank you sweet Paul :)-luloo
Nayak Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Hearty congrats on your great win dear Luloo, lovely imagery , can visualise the twilight beauty,nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:10 PM
thank you sweet Anu :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Beautiful!
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:09 PM
thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 5:47 PM
I love this. It's such a cool form for poetry.
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:08 PM
thank you Andrea :)-luloo
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October 9, 2016 at 6:16 AM
love afterglow so uplifting...liked it Laura. Love.
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:08 PM
thank you Rajat :)-luloo
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October 9, 2016 at 4:09 AM
Another new form of poetry I was not familar with. Really lovely Kimo.
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:08 PM
thank you Pretty Paloma :)-luloo
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