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One Hundred and Ten

Bobby, how could you, why would you eat mine? Little brother, don't you know...that stealing is a crime? I know that my candy...looked quite appealing But, what would mom and dad do...if they knew you've been stealing I found ten empty wrappers, so you've eaten ten of my pieces Some Snickers, some Hershey's and a couple of Reese's Now, go stand in the corner and count to one hundred...and ten Then promise me you won't never, ever, steal from anyone...again If I Were Your Brother Poetry Contest Sponsor Bobby May 10/21/2019

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2019 10:14:00 AM

Delightful poem. Congrats on your win. Hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/1/2019 7:21:00 PM

well that was letting him off easy but teaching him a valuable lesson in life... good penning Charlie...congrats on your win! :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 2:43:00 PM

I'd be worried, Charlie. Bobbie only managed to count to 107, when he finally ran out of fingers, toes, fingernails, cuts, scratches, bruises, etc... LOL! Congrats on your win in the contest! Smiles, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2019 9:52:00 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Charlie :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/30/2019 9:36:00 AM

Hi Charlie, What a good entry for the contest. I really enjoyed the read . Count to a 110? He won't be stealing anytime soon. Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement

Curtis Moorman

Date: 10/24/2019 5:26:00 PM

Charles, you sly rascal! You know how to get results from little brothers, and get what should be a first place win in the contest. Great write, my friend!