One Half

A sailboat floats without a sail.
It’s like a shovel minus pail
Or else a hammer sans a nail,
One half of what is needed.

A tennis court without a net,
An error made with no regret;
A workout lacking any sweat,
A rye bread that’s unseeded.

A birthday passing with no cake,
A pile of leaves without a rake.
In every case, a true mistake
If no one interceded.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Like a peach without a pit, or a country which doesn't give a you-know-what. lol. ~ Sorely lacking
Leffanta Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Yet millions live to enjoy another day without their spouse . . . . Well thought and done, Ilene! Aloha!
Slaughter Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 2:26 PM
There is, for me, a real sense of melancholy in this one, Ilene. And, you're probably right. Nothing...if anything...is complete in and of itself.
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