One Great Promise

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Rainbow
A promise made
Sanctioned from above
Grounded on each end~blue, gold, red
Flood~No

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2015 1:11:00 PM

ever glowing piece, sara... i like this!.. huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2015 9:53:00 AM

a beautiful poem Sarah

Jack Horne

Date: 6/16/2015 9:54:00 AM

lol, love the last line - no indeed!

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/16/2015 7:33:00 AM

Short, sweet, to the point and so true. beautifully Done Sara. Stay Blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/16/2015 4:27:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2015 4:04:00 PM

very nice one, Sara. I was fully expecting to see a rainbow overhead yesterday when it was raining while the sun shone.But it did not happen!

Diane Christian

Date: 6/15/2015 3:34:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments on my poem/song ill sing to my king I carnt play musical instruments but I have sang it as a song as I imagined it might sound, and I have uploaded it to you tube with a few other songs I wrote And have started reading poems and uploading them too God is good, and I just got out the boat stepped out in faith and went for it, I would of never imagined singing to the world , to anyone that views it,

Diane Christian

Date: 6/15/2015 1:18:00 PM

Lovely, I love the rainbow

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/15/2015 10:38:00 AM

This is extremely beautiful penned and Rainbow also is beautiful, I enjoy the read.........A.M.