One Glance

The morning sun bursts through the window.The cloudless sky's
 and the musical cerp from every bird

Its all the little things that makes 
us who we are

I arrive to a place with anger streaming through 
the air and yet theres a person who makes it breath taking for me

This person I admire.She makes a dull atmosphere happy
 just with one smile it can be all done

This person I require for with out this person it would 
be a fearful and empty place 

This person has me swept from my feet with sun 
glare power from her eyes 

This person I desire for that if I could but have
 her I would live forever happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/1/2010 9:06:00 AM
Sometimes special people enter our lives and cast a joyful glow. I hope you have this person in your life forever, Elton. Many readers can relate to the feelings you've described here. Have you entered this in the "Brightest Star" contest? I think it would do very well. Peace and blessings for the holidays, Carolyn
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:21:00 AM
my sentiments exactly. John H. Loving III
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:29:00 PM
beautiful write Elton,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:43:00 PM
Sorry but I am married....sweet write though!!
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