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One Fine Morn

On hushed lawn's carpet, glisten drops of sunshine On fences, soft winds whisper prayers to sleepy vines In kitchens early risers on dainty croissants dine Whilst cross the ocean, lovers sip daydreams of wine

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 4/16/2019 6:30:00 PM

It could be a cool rap, uhmmmm, the intelectual one, let say, Baudelaire and Rimbaud rapping) Nice, very nice verse, Wolf.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2019 8:10:00 PM

Wow. Such an inspiring comment, Kurt. You have lifted my spirits and infused me with energy. Thank you so much! Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/2/2019 6:44:00 AM

Beautiful, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2019 8:46:00 AM

Now just remove the comma from your comment, and I'll be able to agree with you wholeheartedly... LOL! … Thank you so much, Line. :) gw

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/2/2019 5:42:00 AM

It is after midnight here in the Islands Gershon. I often think about it being morning in the UK when it is night here. A lovely poem Gershon! Good morning! : ) xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2019 8:47:00 AM

And good and a great morning to you, Connie! Best always, Gershon

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/1/2019 11:54:00 PM

This was a quite beautiful rhyme; well done.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, M.L. Appreciate your support. Best wishes, Gershon