One Fine Morn

On hushed lawn's carpet, glisten drops of sunshine
   On fences, soft winds whisper prayers to sleepy vines 

In kitchens early risers on dainty croissants dine
   Whilst cross the ocean, lovers sip daydreams of wine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ravidas Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 6:30 PM
It could be a cool rap, uhmmmm, the intelectual one, let say, Baudelaire and Rimbaud rapping) Nice, very nice verse, Wolf.
Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 8:10 PM
Wow. Such an inspiring comment, Kurt. You have lifted my spirits and infused me with energy. Thank you so much! Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Beautiful, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Now just remove the comma from your comment, and I'll be able to agree with you wholeheartedly... LOL! … Thank you so much, Line. :) gw
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 5:42 AM
It is after midnight here in the Islands Gershon. I often think about it being morning in the UK when it is night here. A lovely poem Gershon! Good morning! : ) xxoo
Wolf Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 8:47 AM
And good and a great morning to you, Connie! Best always, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 11:54 PM
This was a quite beautiful rhyme; well done.
Wolf Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so much, M.L. Appreciate your support. Best wishes, Gershon
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