Get Your Premium Membership

One Dusty Day

The day my life went comotose..!! I walked and walked and walked.. amidst the vehicles, forgetting myself,lost in thoughts, manipulating my mind, immersing my whole body into heated dust that was breezing around me..And, suddenly my heart felt the pain, began to shudder hopelessly and felt as though "I am going to collapse" due to extreme fatigue.. ~DEEPA~ Placed as Honorable Mention In BRIAN'S CHOICE 8,any form,any theme Poetry contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.


Book: Reflection on the Important Things