One Dusty Day
The day my life went comotose..!!
I walked and walked and walked..
amidst the vehicles,
forgetting myself,lost in thoughts,
manipulating my mind,
immersing my whole body into heated dust
that was breezing around me..And,
suddenly my heart felt the pain, began
to shudder hopelessly and felt
as though "I am going to collapse"
due to extreme fatigue..
~DEEPA~
Placed as Honorable Mention
In BRIAN'S CHOICE 8,any form,any theme
Poetry contest.
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