One Direction

depressed on cloud nine
lank legs dangling off the edge...
no need of sat nav

 © Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Hi Harry, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Koplin Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win, Harry!
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 3:03 AM
- Back with congratulations, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Congrats, Harry ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Back with congratulations, Harry!
Allison Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Harry, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 5:05 AM
From the clouds one can see everything, well, maybe. Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Your acknowledgement of my work is always encouraging. Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 6:16 AM
- An impressive poem, Harry ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 5:16 AM
What an informative Sat Nav poem, it beams with spirit and knowledge dear Harry, Winning wishes are floating on the waves of the ocean right to you, poet.
Byrne Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Hi Harry, Short and straight to the point. Brilliant. Look after yourself. Frances
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 4:27 AM
deep dark and sadly many can relate to it at the moment:-( hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 3:48 AM
Feel better my friend! Great senryu.
Cunningham Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:41 AM
Its a long way down, how often we've been there then the sat nav kicks in. Good luck in the contest Harry. Tom
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January 10, 2021 at 9:40 PM
Superb senryu. Best for a win. ~~
Downing  Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:14 PM
This is one millions can resonate to. Great work, Harry, and best wishes in the contest :)
Ball Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 8:50 PM
Well done Harry. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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