One Day

One day my love, we will be together One day my love, like times shared before One day my love, i'll be here forever One day my love, i'll love you much more One day my love, my love will just end One day my love, when hearts beat no more One day my love, until this depend One day my love, my heart will be yours One day my love, and all in between One day my love, of this I am sure One day my love, 'tis of you I dream One day my love, my sad heart you'll cure One day my love, in your eyes I will stare One day my love, before you i'll stand One day my love, my bold heart will dare One day my love, to take of your hand One day my love, one day..

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Dave Timperley

Date: 6/1/2017 7:42:00 AM

Shruti, you flit from past to present. I hope she is still in the present and not a loving memory. Nice write my friend. Hope to see more. God Bless. D.

Dave Timperley

Date: 6/1/2017 7:26:00 AM

I hope that one day has come Martyn. Mine did 47 years ago in October. Still here today. God Bless. D

Martyn Austin
Date: 6/6/2017 5:35:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Dave. This woman is still very much in the present, although I will say that I do have only loving memories of others, who sadly passed some years ago now. I'm glad you liked and commented on this piece. I hope to be posting some more of my older poems soon. God bless you too sir.