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One Day

One day i hope to see your face and hold you in yore loving embrace for i miss your smile on your face for my life feels so outer place like a rift in time and a split in space my head and heart are in a cold dark lonely place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 10:25:00 AM
darel, thanks for stopping by my writes!
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:16:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Well done, the emotion comes through nicely. This would fit nicely as form : monorhyme if you like.
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Date: 10/7/2010 4:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2010 8:47:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check out the many contests offered on soup site.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/6/2010 2:31:00 PM
welcome to the soup. I enjoyed you wrte and hope to read more soon
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Date: 10/5/2010 5:34:00 PM
wondeful read thank you for sharing [duncan]
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