One Day

One day i hope to see your face and hold you in yore loving embrace
for i miss your smile on your face  for my life feels so outer place
like a rift in time and a split in space my head and heart are in a cold dark lonely place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:25 AM
darel, thanks for stopping by my writes!
Bagnall Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Well done, the emotion comes through nicely. This would fit nicely as form : monorhyme if you like.
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October 7, 2010 at 4:56 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 6, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check out the many contests offered on soup site.. good luck with luv..
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October 6, 2010 at 2:31 PM
welcome to the soup. I enjoyed you wrte and hope to read more soon
Chappell Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:34 PM
wondeful read thank you for sharing [duncan]
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