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One Common Ground

One common ground we all share, That life maps for us - fair and square; We do start scattered all around, Ending up in common ground. From down below we aren't much worth - While still above, let's save the earth. May 30, 2022

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Date: 6/1/2022 10:01:00 AM
The six lines clearly define life superbly also. She has made us think through her Socratic words to silence us by exhibiting sheer truth. I admire her profound thinking and in a way feel humiliated for my inability to think and write a gem like this!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 6/1/2022 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, she is humbled:)
Date: 5/31/2022 8:02:00 PM
The majority are not concerned with the Earth they bequeath to their grandchildren, but let us hope your poem motivates some of them to care! Aloha!
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