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One Cold Winters Night

Way up the canyon just over the ridge Lovers meet by the old covered bridge So long they have waited so far apart Lost in the beauty of each others heart The river is icy ground covered with snow As the moon up above puts off its glow They go to the cabin all nestled away By the light of fire throw caution away As she undresses he can't help but stare For she has a beauty beyond compare She notices his eyes so deep and so blue With a fire of desire that melts her into Into his arms and through out the night They embrace passion so full of delight Exhausted and tired at the end of it all Outside the snow has started to fall He thinks how life or so it would seem Has suddenly became a beautiful dream Sometimes in life we can't help but chance The heat of passion found in romance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/20/2008 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in the "from the heart" contest. A true winner, Michael! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2008 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations. It is such a romantic poem. An absolute pleasure to read. Regards, Rupavardhini
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Date: 10/15/2008 1:25:00 PM
The romantic in you comes out in this one. Congratulations on having it chosen as one of the winners in John's contest. I wish you continued sucess with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/13/2008 12:02:00 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments.Chaucer was the English author of the renown Canterbury Tales,perhaps the 'father' of English poetry.In the link picture he is reading to poets down the ages.
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Date: 10/12/2008 6:19:00 PM
Such a sweet anf romantic poem, love love loved this. Congrats on your win, love Kristin
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Date: 10/12/2008 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations dear Michael on your Honorable Mention in John's contest! YAY! and so well deserved! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 8/25/2008 11:55:00 PM
Wow, I'm blushing! This is truly a poem of passion! What a nice way to turn up the heat on a cold night! Now I'm really looking forward to the Winter season! Once again, great write!
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Date: 7/23/2008 9:23:00 AM
Now I'm getting cabin fever. Great write, Michael. Vince
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Date: 7/19/2008 10:38:00 AM
really enjoyed reading this Michael, you used a good choice of words in this one, the poem flowed real well. thank you for reading my rolling river and for your kind comment
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Date: 7/15/2008 7:51:00 AM
No, we must chance that! Excellent flow and perfect rhyme and details made this a marvelous write my friend. Keep it up! Michael
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Date: 7/14/2008 8:51:00 AM
Now Michael. If I am not careful you will be writing your own novels and than I will be out of luck to get my marketed. This is beautiful. It brings lots of ideas to mind. God Bless, Mom Beer
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Date: 7/13/2008 10:24:00 AM
Wow, beautiful poetry. Michael thank you for your recent comments they are greatly appreciated, Ron
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Date: 7/13/2008 12:44:00 AM
Lovely conclusion to this one Michael.Rgds Brian * thanks for your comments on my recent postings
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Date: 7/12/2008 10:14:00 PM
Very romantic! My imaginative mind worked when I read it! I really appreciated and loved the storyline :)
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Date: 7/12/2008 8:34:00 AM
The picture you paint is so vivid, that it's almost as if we shouldn't be watching this couple in love! So descriptive! Great job!....Carrie
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Date: 7/12/2008 4:07:00 AM
Wow Michael. A passionate love story with amazing imagery and perfect rhyme and flow. Reminds me of a scene from a movie. Excellent! Love, Shar
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Date: 7/11/2008 6:49:00 PM
Awesome...if I could rate this one higher I would, I loved this write, Always, Christy
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