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One Cold Beer Too Many

one cold beer too many and she's crying on the lawn memorial parade going by bands firetrucks baton twirlers one cold beer too many and the grill is forgotton dinner is burning the corn husks flaming in the dusk one cold beer too many and she's mumbling at the kitchen table brave enough to say that she wishes he'd stay even though she knows she drove him away one cold beer too many and she gets maudlin and reminicent but the hard cold look in his eyes shuts her down

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Date: 9/11/2009 4:50:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Veronica. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 2:29:00 PM
Its not fictional, but also not autobiographical - don't worry! Not drinking or driving.... thanks for the comments!
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Date: 9/10/2009 2:01:00 PM
Guess an extra drink will do that -- bring out the emotions we seek to squelch. Veronica, there is a Broadway show tune "One Rock and Roll too Many" and I found myself reading this poem with a similar rhythm. Very nicely composed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:47:00 PM
Sad. Sara
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