One Christmas Eve

Attempting to await St. Nick, small Ted lay trembling with excitement in his bed, one Christmas Eve while all his siblings slept (their promise to stay up with him unkept). Like smoke that rose above his house that night and drifted to the moon, his thoughts took flight. He wondered (and he couldn't comprehend) how dear old Santa ever could descend the chimney to his house when at its base were sparks that sputtered in the fireplace. So as he pondered what St. Nick might do, he left his room just as the clock struck two. He tiptoed to the stairs where he could see a figure on the rug nearby the tree. . . Midst wrapping paper, boxes and a tangle of ribbons knelt his mother. At an angle, the firelight warmly touched her face. Her hair showed flecks of sugar. Ted stooped on a stair transfixed. . . The sugar looked like angel's dust! And then he understood how long she must have worked because the scent of cooking pies was proof of it. Ted suddenly felt wise. . . He realized how sweet pies could appear like magic every Christmas. All was clear! A single mom, this angel in his sight began to hum the tune to "Silent Night." Unseen, Ted lingered on the stair, content in knowing his St. Nick was heaven sent. (not sure if this is the "epic" you had in mind, Leonora. but this is my submission for your contest! Merry Christmas)
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Godwin Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Very and wonderfully imaginative ... CayCay
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Andrea, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Nance Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 7:33 AM
aww this brought tears to my eyes, what a special poem! I love it!
A  Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 9:46 PM
ANDREA, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~
Jones Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations Andrea...a masterpiece by you...a perfect way for Christmas magic to become Christmas memories forever...
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:24 PM
now ted knows... lovely write till the end. andie.. sweet congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 1:00 PM
beautiful Andrea a fine pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
May Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 10:21 AM
such a beautiful write Andrea ...congrats on your win
Horsch Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Andrea, This is a wonderful poem and should have taken a first place in my opinion. But we take what we can get. Congrats on a wonderful win....Hugs...Roger
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 4:20 AM
Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, Andrea
Gasun Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 2:18 AM
My heartfelt congratulations my dearest friend, Andrea ! And, this is yours! You're already there my very dear friend! Biggest hugs to you! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 4:26 AM
What a beautiful poem. I love it.
Esquire Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Dear Andrea, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2010.I see Another Congratulations on this well deserved Featured POEM. I am with Phyllis on this Holiday Season. YOU have captured the Essence of Christmas through Ted's Eyes and Heart. Superb Pen With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Breidenthal Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 12:26 PM
This sure evokes the excitement and happiness during this vibrant time of year. A most heartwarming piece. Always, Laura
Horne Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Awww, what a lovely piece, my friend. I thought I'd try reading your oldest stuff and found it much easier than I'd expected to
Babcock Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:32 AM
This is an awesome write for the Christmas season. AS you know not my favorite time of year. Phyl
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December 2, 2010 at 1:38 PM
So heart warming a beautiful read for the holiday.My friends on PS are one of the reasons I keep writing cause you'll read and leave such wonderful comments on my work.So thank you very much Andrea for those terrific comments !!!!!!keep-em comming. HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS Your friend Teresa
A   Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:52 AM
ANDREA, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
Temkin Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 2:09 PM
congrats on your feature! This poem is very sweet <3
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrea. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Zounds and odds bodkins! The soupers must really like this poem. I know I certainly do. More congrats. Love, Dave
Austin Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 5:01 PM
I did what you did, Andrea, I went to the end of the line for a poem. Lo, I have commented on this poem long ago. Boy, howdy! This masterpiece was sho worth another read! Love, Dave
Chachere Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 9:15 PM
christmas eve is always somewhat a magical day. well its okay to get your dance on anytime. . lol.my mom would make sure we saw her dancing. she would dance like she was in "our" time.
A  Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Wonderful enjoyed Iam a sucker for X-mas all year . Believe it or not I still watch all kinds of x-mass movies .It always brings out the sheer in me all year. In a way you can say I am like TED . Always believing x-mass is a gift from GOD...I LOVED YOUR POEM..
Douglass Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 3:30 AM
Very nice! I have a christmas eve poem you may want to read! :) (:
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