One Candle To Another

A flame transferred
from one candle
  to another

A moment's hesitation
then each looks
  like the other

A loving mother
passes wisdom on
  to her daughter

She too lingers
'til the flame is lit
  of what she taught her
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June 19, 2021 at 3:52 AM
In order to discover, first, one must explore. Second hand wisdom is rarely appreciated and usually forgotten. I do love the concept of transferring a flame. However i think there is something inside of us which makes us want to learn from our own experiences. Failure is the best teacher. Nicely scribed, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Perhaps you'll have a moment to re-read this one, Daniel. It's all about sticking around to support s/o until she is on her feet/the flame is lit. As for exploring, of course. Thanks, Gershon
Bauer Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Wise and well-said, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 8:41 PM
I'll take this comment every time, ilene. TYSM! :) gw
Hankins Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Excellent way of putting it, Gershon. The transfer of wisdom....
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Thanks, Milt. Many candles to be lit...
Sands Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Very nice Gershon. Great comparison. :)
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi. Have a spectacular weekend! ~ gw
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