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One Broken Monoku

one feeble couple barely survives a broken gate swings in the wind Sponsor: Rick Parice Contest: One Broken Monoku

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/17/2017 9:13:00 PM

Gosh, I haven't seen you in such a long time. I love this style. On to your next poem. So I can catch up :)

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/13/2016 1:50:00 PM

Very Deep, as a movie ending.

Pulkita Anand

Date: 12/29/2015 8:36:00 PM

It is wonderful to read the typograhical innovation in your poetry. Your poems convey the sense and the image that you wanna lend to reader through your creation. Amazing!!!

Matt Mcqueeney

Date: 12/29/2015 5:01:00 PM

beautiful words...I said a prayer, will try to remember to continue to.

Toni Orban

Date: 12/29/2015 1:20:00 PM

Wow so few words mean so much. Just lovley. T. Orban

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2015 1:44:00 PM

Wonderful Sara :) PD

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/29/2014 2:25:00 AM

It is all time best for me.You are wonderful Sara in this poem. You are always a winner for me.Good luck for 2015. Best wishes to you and your family. Love.Your friend Rajat

Joseph May

Date: 12/28/2014 9:35:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 8:59:00 AM

SARA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/28/2014 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations Sara, this was beyond me, all the best for the new year luv xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/27/2014 9:19:00 PM

Congrats on the win Sara...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2014 9:18:00 PM

woo hoo!!! Congrats to YOU, Sara. Luv, Andrea

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 7:18:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your well deserved first place win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2014 7:13:00 PM

Sara, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 5:51:00 PM

Back to say many congrats on your win Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2014 4:34:00 PM

Congrats on your very deserved win, Sara. This is beautiful and meaningful. #7 and a fav! Take care. // paul

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 3:37:00 PM

congratulations on this win Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2014 7:58:00 AM

I can see why this one was chosen. Fantastic with such few words.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 12/4/2014 6:03:00 PM

Nice Sara. Congratulations on Dec. 3, 2014 poem of the day... Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/4/2014 7:38:00 AM

So very beautiful Sara. So few words saying so much. Congratulations on poem of the day. Sorry I am late.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/4/2014 12:03:00 AM

My heart aches reading these poignant lines...I worked many years with elderly people. Aging is difficult enough but when, older people are lonely and forgotten, then they barely survive. Reading your monoku reminds me...so sad. Congrats to you on being chosen TPOD...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2014 5:30:00 PM

really enjoyed reading this one again sara congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx

Terence Alexander Cupit

Date: 12/3/2014 3:30:00 PM

Cool.

John Fleming

Date: 12/3/2014 1:16:00 PM

Very appealing, Sara! :) john.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/3/2014 1:09:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your poem to be selected for the day. It is so hard for the elderly to keep up with what needs to be done. Blessings eve