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One Broken Monoku

one feeble couple barely survives
                                                               a broken gate swings in the wind  

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Debbie Duncan

June 17, 2017 at 9:13 PM

Gosh, I haven't seen you in such a long time. I love this style. On to your next poem. So I can catch up :)

J Hamilton Gist

January 13, 2016 at 1:50 PM

Very Deep, as a movie ending.

Pulkita Anand

December 29, 2015 at 8:36 PM

It is wonderful to read the typograhical innovation in your poetry. Your poems convey the sense and the image that you wanna lend to reader through your creation. Amazing!!!

Matt Mcqueeney

December 29, 2015 at 5:01 PM

beautiful words...I said a prayer, will try to remember to continue to.

Toni Orban

December 29, 2015 at 1:20 PM

Wow so few words mean so much. Just lovley. T. Orban

Poet Destroyer A

April 24, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Wonderful Sara :) PD

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 29, 2014 at 2:25 AM

It is all time best for me.You are wonderful Sara in this poem. You are always a winner for me.Good luck for 2015. Best wishes to you and your family. Love.Your friend Rajat

Joseph May

December 28, 2014 at 9:35 AM

Congrats on a fine win Sara

Poet Destroyer A

December 28, 2014 at 8:59 AM

SARA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 28, 2014 at 7:54 AM

Congratulations Sara, this was beyond me, all the best for the new year luv xx

Kayod5 Kayode

December 27, 2014 at 9:19 PM

Congrats on the win Sara...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2014 at 9:18 PM

woo hoo!!! Congrats to YOU, Sara. Luv, Andrea

Maurice Yvonne

December 27, 2014 at 7:18 PM

Congratulations Sara on your well deserved first place win!

Sandra Haight

December 27, 2014 at 7:13 PM

Sara, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

December 27, 2014 at 5:51 PM

Back to say many congrats on your win Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

December 27, 2014 at 4:34 PM

Congrats on your very deserved win, Sara. This is beautiful and meaningful. #7 and a fav! Take care. // paul

Robert Stoner Jr

December 27, 2014 at 3:37 PM

congratulations on this win Sara

Richard Lamoureux

December 5, 2014 at 7:58 AM

I can see why this one was chosen. Fantastic with such few words.

Verlena S. Walker

December 4, 2014 at 6:03 PM

Nice Sara. Congratulations on Dec. 3, 2014 poem of the day... Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 4, 2014 at 7:38 AM

So very beautiful Sara. So few words saying so much. Congratulations on poem of the day. Sorry I am late.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

December 4, 2014 at 12:03 AM

My heart aches reading these poignant lines...I worked many years with elderly people. Aging is difficult enough but when, older people are lonely and forgotten, then they barely survive. Reading your monoku reminds me...so sad. Congrats to you on being chosen TPOD...hugs, Rhonda