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one broken monoku

one feeble couple barely survives a broken gate swings in the wind
Sponsor: Rick Parice Contest: One Broken Monoku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/17/2017 9:13:00 PM
Gosh, I haven't seen you in such a long time. I love this style. On to your next poem. So I can catch up :)
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Date: 1/13/2016 1:50:00 PM
Very Deep, as a movie ending.
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:36:00 PM
It is wonderful to read the typograhical innovation in your poetry. Your poems convey the sense and the image that you wanna lend to reader through your creation. Amazing!!!
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:01:00 PM
beautiful words...I said a prayer, will try to remember to continue to.
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:20:00 PM
Wow so few words mean so much. Just lovley. T. Orban
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Date: 4/24/2015 1:44:00 PM
Wonderful Sara :) PD
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Date: 12/29/2014 2:25:00 AM
It is all time best for me.You are wonderful Sara in this poem. You are always a winner for me.Good luck for 2015. Best wishes to you and your family. Love.Your friend Rajat
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:35:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Sara
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:59:00 AM
SARA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, this was beyond me, all the best for the new year luv xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 9:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win Sara...huggs
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Date: 12/27/2014 9:18:00 PM
woo hoo!!! Congrats to YOU, Sara. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on your well deserved first place win!
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:13:00 PM
Sara, stopping back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2014 5:51:00 PM
Back to say many congrats on your win Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 4:34:00 PM
Congrats on your very deserved win, Sara. This is beautiful and meaningful. #7 and a fav! Take care. // paul
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:37:00 PM
congratulations on this win Sara
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:58:00 AM
I can see why this one was chosen. Fantastic with such few words.
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Date: 12/4/2014 6:03:00 PM
Nice Sara. Congratulations on Dec. 3, 2014 poem of the day... Verlena
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:38:00 AM
So very beautiful Sara. So few words saying so much. Congratulations on poem of the day. Sorry I am late.
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Date: 12/4/2014 12:03:00 AM
My heart aches reading these poignant lines...I worked many years with elderly people. Aging is difficult enough but when, older people are lonely and forgotten, then they barely survive. Reading your monoku reminds me...so sad. Congrats to you on being chosen TPOD...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/3/2014 5:30:00 PM
really enjoyed reading this one again sara congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2014 3:30:00 PM
Cool.
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Date: 12/3/2014 1:16:00 PM
Very appealing, Sara! :) john.
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Date: 12/3/2014 1:09:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your poem to be selected for the day. It is so hard for the elderly to keep up with what needs to be done. Blessings eve
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