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One Bright Spirit

All my life’s moments unite and resound
All that I was, all that we are
One bright spirit is homeward bound

Once heartbreak and loss, now eternal love found
Time can’t be measured, not close, not far
All my life’s moments unite and resound

The return voyage seemed bleak with no one around
No hand to hold, no guiding star
One bright spirit is homeward bound

It’s late, they’ve poured the final round
It’s time to close the bar
All my life’s moments unite and resound

Trees don’t bear fruit in rocky ground
Dreams cannot take root in tar
One bright spirit is homeward bound

The last New Year’s has passed, a last champagne downed
The final door is slightly ajar
All my life’s moments unite and resound
One bright spirit is homeward bound

Seventh Place
An Original Villanelle Contest- L MILTON HANKINS
2/27/22

First Place
Brian Strand Poetry Contest
3/5/22
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Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 9:44 AM
"Trees can't take root in tar." Wonderful line among to many memorable lines of vivid images Robert. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
Gorelick Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Thank you, Robert
Agustin Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 1:10 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Gorelick Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Robert
Calasibetta Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Profound and moving write! :)Paulette
Gorelick Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Robert
Hankins Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations, Rob, on your placement in my Villanelle contest. I loved your poem and felt it was very deserving. Thanks for the entry.
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:54 PM
I am very pleased with the results. This my first Villanelle...very grateful
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