One a M Soliloquy

ONE A.M. SOLILOQUY the thunder rattled my sleep - vibrating windows and walls, eyes shut tight 4/7/2019

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/18/2019 9:48:00 AM

Kim, you remind me so well of my days in the Midwest. Both thunder and lightning frightened me. Glad to live in a city where both are a rare occurrence. Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2019 3:48:00 PM

Both can be disheartening!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/8/2019 9:07:00 PM

You're way better than I am, Kim. When the thunder awakens me, I'm the one who initiates the soliloquy, the unprintable soliloquy! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2019 3:48:00 PM

Eyes shut tight could mean sleep or fear...lol

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2019 12:43:00 AM

And yet is this not the best sleep ever?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2019 5:30:00 PM

Perhaps...lol