Once Your Eyes

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world     i        l
          c        e
spins       s......s a d l y
a pony you sat upon.................lookingthroughme,
passing,
                 as 
yesturdaysclowns.............................................................................................................
...............................andkaliopes........echo distant...
                                                                                          ...  tents (space once filled)...
once your EyEs
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Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 5:20 AM
Creative!
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Keep writing we will keep reading. Excellent Orphani.....o. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 6:35 AM
i love your style ..different...love the ending..... echo distant ...tents..refuge--excellent--Charma
Null Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 10:00 PM
Very nice, I like the unique style...Karla
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