Notes About The Poem

Once upon a time

Youth released to the breeze.
Sense of joy abounds in vivid colour.
Time fleeting outside precious moments.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 4:36 PM
well said. :-)
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:42 PM
Such great imagery. I was there....
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