Once Upon a Shiny Polished Day

Once upon a shiny polished day, the sun shone bright as golden ray
and in the park where the children played the puppies danced ballet 
The kittens meowed from their outdoor yum cafe 
and the birds chirped from the trees while they surveyed 
the pretty ducklings waddling in the pond, hurray hurray ! 

Once upon a starlit night the moon smiled sweetly at the sea 
and in the river all the loons echoed across the lake, woo wee 
The owl gave a hoot and the foxes slept tee hee 
while the rabbit stretched and caught a snack or three  

Once upon a fairytale a little Pixie cast a spell
and all the sicklies of the forest were suddenly made well 
each precious creature went pell-mell at the sound of a Fairy's Bell 
while all the ogres, trolls and elves, tap danced on a chanterelle.

Sponsor	BJ Legros Kelley
Contest Name	Write a Sweet Fairytale For Children
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Legros Kelley Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 9:35 PM
So sweet Mystic Rose, I wish we had some of that wonderful fairy dust to pour heavily down on our world today, we need it so badly! Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering your sweet poem, we truly enjoyed the nice format as well <3
Y. Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 11:26 PM
Hi Mystic, You penned such a lovely “ fairytale” entry for the contest. Best wishes for the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
Goff Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Such a beautiful mind inks so creatively Mystic Rose! Love it & you! ((Aldo 2!)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 9:36 AM
A fun fairytale write/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Deschler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 6:54 AM
I would love to spend a day in such an enchanting place! Your wonderful poem takes me there...
Pandit Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 6:18 AM
A wonderful fairytale scripted in splendid vocabulary, Vienna. Shiny polished day, starlit night-- rejoice in this poem. Much enjoyed!
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 3:29 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Vie Rose ... a story for both adults and children to enjoy - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 12:13 AM
touching and beatiful poetry, made me dream of a scenery in nature, i loved it, thanks Rose
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