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Once Upon a Shiny Polished Day

Once upon a shiny polished day, the sun shone bright as golden ray and in the park where the children played the puppies danced ballet The kittens meowed from their outdoor yum cafe and the birds chirped from the trees while they surveyed the pretty ducklings waddling in the pond, hurray hurray ! Once upon a starlit night the moon smiled sweetly at the sea and in the river all the loons echoed across the lake, woo wee The owl gave a hoot and the foxes slept tee hee while the rabbit stretched and caught a snack or three Once upon a fairytale a little Pixie cast a spell and all the sicklies of the forest were suddenly made well each precious creature went pell-mell at the sound of a Fairy's Bell while all the ogres, trolls and elves, tap danced on a chanterelle. Sponsor BJ Legros Kelley Contest Name Write a Sweet Fairytale For Children

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Date: 5/6/2023 9:35:00 PM
So sweet Mystic Rose, I wish we had some of that wonderful fairy dust to pour heavily down on our world today, we need it so badly! Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering your sweet poem, we truly enjoyed the nice format as well <3
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Date: 4/14/2023 11:26:00 PM
Hi Mystic, You penned such a lovely “ fairytale” entry for the contest. Best wishes for the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/14/2023 1:38:00 AM
Such a beautiful mind inks so creatively Mystic Rose! Love it & you! ((Aldo 2!)
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Date: 4/13/2023 9:36:00 AM
A fun fairytale write/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 4/13/2023 6:54:00 AM
I would love to spend a day in such an enchanting place! Your wonderful poem takes me there...
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Date: 4/13/2023 6:18:00 AM
A wonderful fairytale scripted in splendid vocabulary, Vienna. Shiny polished day, starlit night-- rejoice in this poem. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 4/13/2023 3:29:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Vie Rose ... a story for both adults and children to enjoy - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2023 12:13:00 AM
touching and beatiful poetry, made me dream of a scenery in nature, i loved it, thanks Rose
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