Once Upon a Poetic Moon

The carpet's paid for; God Bless the TV,
it keeps us informed.
Cosy in our little room with the curtains drawn
one thing's for certain, we still have
our window on the world

Slowly we've slipped
into 'couch-potato-hood'
Rarely, we fight, over which shows are good
You hold the remote,"It's understood."

Flip, flip, you change channels, searching
for a show with some meaning to you, while
I with books piled high beside me, sit oblivious-
searching for meaning in poetry
I battle with inadeqate words against
the TV's droning tune

Some night I'll write one that 
shoots holes in the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Alex Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 9:41 PM
Great description. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 11:15 AM
What a terrific slice of life SuZ! This sounds like our TV evenings only somewhere between 9 and 10 I take the remote because hubbie has fallen asleep. It makes a nice compromise. I guess that's what marriage is really about after all. Love your last line. Congrats on your win. Looking forward to seeing "holes in the moon."
Delaney Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Sam: Compromise is right…lol. Luckily I have that alternative private world where I don’t need a remote. SuZ
Tacito Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:51 AM
Ha! This was an enjoyable read! A lot of joy & playfulness here. =D
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 1:35 AM
this is such an awesome little peek into your home life, I think!! In my house it is opposite. I let hubbie sit down there with his westerns all evening while i do dinner and dishes and then when I am there for the night, the remote is in MY little hands because hubbie does not even know how to record shows yet and has no interest. So I record all the stuff we watch. haha. (i have to watch SOME things on my own though. He won't tolerate Bachelor) I sure enjoyed this poem of yours.
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 4:02 AM
- Hi Suz........ BRAVO !!! - Love it.... unique poem ! - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Candy Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 12:03 AM
This is original, Suz..!! a very unique poem. I like the way you describe the "disturbed mood atmosphere" in such a cute way ;)
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