Once Upan a Time

Silent thoughts and heavy breathing

Running through screaming woods

Eyes upon you

Faster and faster it chases what was left

Your heart pounds out of your chest

Steady crunching of trees and twigs

You go to scream but you can’t find the words

Or the voice that was given to you

A gift that was left on the floor

Slowing down you climb this hill

Looking off to the ocean you stop at a cliff

The night sky beautiful 

But the person behind you intends to harm

Devastation as you see your face in the mirror

Through broken words and lost I love yous

You plant your knees into the ground

Breaking down a look of sympathy

From your other half

The monster you have become is the man with the gun

On your forehead a slight click

Your worthless body fell off the cliff

Like fallen stars you rest in the ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 3, 2010 at 1:10 AM
WoW very interesting poem. I feel like i am scared with the person in the poem and then the whole thing builds to a very strong ending. love it
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September 3, 2009 at 4:08 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry today Garreth. Love, Carol
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September 2, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Very sad poem. but well written. Vivid imagery. Excellent.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Mystical suicide, or dream perhaps, Sincerely, Moses
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