Once In a Blue Moon

A solitary man was he 
who shunned responsibility 
and crawled back to his empty shell, 
he thought himself alive and well. 
He spurned an opportunity 
for love in perpetuity, 
instead his nervousness took hold, 
he lost the yearning to be bold. 

As weeks went by he grew, imbued 
with loneliness and solitude, 
but not with laughter or the joy 
he well remembered as a boy. 
He grew morose, and disinclined 
to mix with others of his kind, 
he shut himself away with books, 
avoiding disapproving looks. 

Perhaps one day he'll realize 
commitment is a larger prize, 
that the way to win a heart 
is not to run, to be apart. 
He hopes that day is dawning soon, 
but, perhaps, it's like the blue moon 
waiting for its time to rise 
so infrequently before his eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Goudreau Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Love this poem Keith and I am sure many of us can relate to this write. Lovely rhymes and beat in this read. Thank you for sharing!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Thanks Suzanne! Your delightful remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Carrillo Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 3:08 PM
This is very good. Some men miss out on a lot in life, because they don't a commitment. Some women do to. I have seen both. One day they grow old and have nothing. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Bauer Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 4:50 PM
is this a shorter version of a poem you posted not too long ago? the beginning feels like i've read it before, but i don't remember this title or ending. in any case, it's a wonderful poem and i very much enjoyed it, keith...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Yes. It is a re-post with some alterations. l am in the midst of a serious writer's block so I have to resort to re-posts... GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! Thank you for your kind remarks, Ilene! Keith
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