Once In a Blue Moon

A solitary man was he 
who shunned responsibility 
and crawled back to his empty shell, 
he thought himself alive and well. 
He spurned an opportunity 
for love in perpetuity, 
instead his nervousness took hold, 
he lost the yearning to be bold. 

As weeks went by he grew, imbued 
with loneliness and solitude, 
but not with laughter or the joy 
he well remembered as a boy. 
He grew morose, and disinclined 
to mix with others of his kind, 
he shut himself away with books, 
avoiding disapproving looks. 

Perhaps one day he'll realize 
commitment is a larger prize, 
that the way to win a heart 
is not to run, to be apart. 
He hopes that day is dawning soon, 
but, perhaps, it's like the blue moon 
waiting for its time to rise 
so infrequently before his eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Collins Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Dearest Keith - You are back again, full force. Hooray! These words are written for me today. There is something to be said for joining the human race. "'Perhaps one day he'll realize commitment is a larger prize" Do "they also serve who sit and wait"? I have missed the flow of your phrases, the meaning therein. love, Kathy
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Poor soul. The more he withdraws, the worse things will get. Your poet always flows so smoothly!
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Hello my friend...so good to see you..I know this feeling...I'm almost back there myself...wonderful words spilling out here...:-) :-)
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