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Once In a Blue Moon

A solitary man was he who shunned responsibility and crawled back to his empty shell, he thought himself alive and well. He spurned an opportunity for love in perpetuity, instead his nervousness took hold, he lost the yearning to be bold. As weeks went by he grew, imbued with loneliness and solitude, but not with laughter or the joy he well remembered as a boy. He grew morose, and disinclined to mix with others of his kind, he shut himself away with books, avoiding disapproving looks. Perhaps one day he'll realize commitment is a larger prize, that the way to win a heart is not to run, to be apart. He hopes that day is dawning soon, but, perhaps, it's like the blue moon waiting for its time to rise, infrequent, never, to his eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/2/2012 12:12:00 AM
keith i have to say i love your writing, love the flow beautiful work!
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Date: 7/1/2012 7:03:00 PM
Choices. Always a pleasure, Keith.
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Date: 6/30/2012 7:43:00 AM
There you go again my friend, turning the human condition into the flow of the Bickerstaffe river. love, Kathy
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Date: 6/26/2012 1:05:00 PM
Completed poem Keith, like it very much. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/25/2012 3:06:00 PM
If change had another handle and it was callled chance, Keith, I'm certain you would have pounced on it! A quietly reflective write, enjoyed this!! Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:45:00 AM
i see here a great craftsman putting words together in a very reflective way, keith... you wow me!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/25/2012 1:18:00 AM
Oh" I like this very much,,,,, you have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:22:00 PM
keith - your rhyming is like the smoothest sip of cognac - it goes down so easily and warms you all the way through. i love reading it! it's a real treat...
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:12:00 PM
wow! what a stunner this is! great pen Keith!
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:10:00 PM
Fantastic write, Keith! It flows so smoothly and the rhyming is perfect. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:37:00 PM
Keith, i understand how one can shun out such a thing.. I'm on the brink of life right now... and still i want to crawl back into that empty egg shell... but, I can't! I know realize i'm not the only one who feels like this.. as is your poem... thank you for sharing..pd
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:22:00 PM
ME LIKES, Keith!! I was very attracted to this one for its title. I have one posted way back toward my first days at soup with this exact title, but it is NOTHING like this one!! ARe you curious? Let me go see some more of yours.
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:17:00 PM
love it it's well written
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