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Once Bitten

And suddenly you wonder why I’m "once bitten twice shy" when putting all my faith in guys I’m vulnerable I guess I sense your animosity; it tends to gravitate to me I don’t know why you’re mad at ME I didn’t make this mess! I just grew tired of your lies and clinging to your alibis our love was sure to go awry when putting to the test I’ve tried to find the good in you and believe me I have wanted to there’s nothing else that I can do but say I tried my best.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/2/2017 5:11:00 PM
Nicely done Gayle, don't lose faith, plenty of decent blokes out there. Kind regards, Craig
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 6/2/2017 6:27:00 PM
Oh I think the majority of people out there are still kind to each other. This may have been just a bump in the road years ago ;)
Date: 6/2/2017 1:55:00 AM
Very deep! It's beautiful!
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 6/2/2017 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Precioso
Date: 6/1/2017 11:41:00 AM
Nice flow to this, it reads smoothly and the rhyme scheme is spot on.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 6/1/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thank you kind sir ;)

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