Once An Asp

ONCE AN

A small slithering 
Snake sneaking 
Poison bites on prey

AWAYS AN ASP


May 5, 2018


Asp Contest by Anthony Slausen
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John Gondolf

May 6, 2018 at 8:23 AM

Very clever, Susan, nicely done. John

Susan Gentry

May 6, 2018 at 6:40 PM

Thanks, John.

Roy Pett

May 5, 2018 at 5:23 AM

Absolutely brilliant Susan, so clever, put a smile on my old face thank you. :))

Susan Gentry

May 5, 2018 at 1:19 PM

Thank you! Now that makes me smile. :)

CayCay Godwin

May 4, 2018 at 9:05 AM

I had to look because I got nothing in me creative-wise for all slimy life and ended up with my first morning laugh about asps of all things! So clever and amusing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Susan Gentry

May 4, 2018 at 2:48 PM

Lol. I had nothing either. I doubt it will make any list of winners but is good for a smile.